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Jun 3, 2008, 7:39:56 PM
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Long Lost Toy by girltripped Long Lost Toy by girltripped
Winter in Meschantes Couture [link]
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Mirabeau style corset in black worsted wool with white mesh bust ruffles and halter strap. Busk front closure, back laced.

Pencil skirt in white satin with white and black ruffle detail.

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Okay I cheated. I visited the website link.

1. I find 90% of this charming. Not especially original. Although the Pencil skirt in white satin was different.

2. My biggest grrr is the model faces away from the camera which doesn't invite the shopper or artist inside her experience. I found this odd. On the website, most models look at the camera either 100% to 25% of the time. Most of GirlTripped works invites you inside the frame. :shrug:

3. My second annoyance it's in black and white and has the too busy tiger stripped background. This background steals the eyes from the outfit. I suggests color version with a solid deep cherry red background. Not sure how, GirlTripped would do this. I'm no photo shop expert. Might be simple as swapping backgrounds with a button click.
4. I found charming this tiny hat, lace stockings and corset.
5. A in-color version would rock, but not with the stripped or any stripped background.

Summary: On the whole have model make eye contact with the camera and swap out the background.

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CandiceSmithPhoto Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011
This image has been featured in my latest alphabet feature, "Z - Zebras" and can be found here: [link]

Hope you like it :)
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reina343 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome background
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JimmyJoeBobMA Featured By Owner May 27, 2010
beautiful pose. how did you get that background?
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jedimasterpadme Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
great shot.
i was just wondering if this is an all-in-one dress or is the skirt and or top seperate to the corset?
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girltripped Featured By Owner May 4, 2010
they're separate :)
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verticalness Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Great shot.
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angelaCRUNK Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009
featured (: [link]
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Mrs-Thea Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009
ouuuch... that's awesome!the pose .. and outfit.. of course!
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PuNgHi15 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009
:heart: ---> [link]
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Nextrockangel Featured By Owner May 15, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Very sad, really makes you think.
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